literature

Old Winter

Deviation Actions

LaBruyere's avatar
By
Published:
264 Views

Literature Text

When comes the old man winter in,
Comports himself like king and crown
There's naught to do but let him win
For bones have no defense deep down
    We might as well just let him win;
    There's no resisting king and crown.

Perhaps the host can bid him sit
Beside the logs in fireplace
Make him comfortable--to wit
Warm him through from foot to face.
    Perhaps he's happy just to sit
    If we warm him foot to face.

Perhaps his frosted hands will rest
And icy breath turn into steam
His head could lay upon his chest
And be enticed mayhap to dream.
    If we could merely bid him rest
    Perhaps his ice will turn to dreams.

And there, maybe, by fire's glow
He'll sleep until the winter's gone
Mild and warm, convinced to go,
And let the spring come early on.
    Oh let him mellow, let him go,
    And usher spring in, early on.
For day 24 of :iconprojectdfc:--the inverted refrain.

I've had some of these done and just need to type them. But I'm still behind--can I write four today before midnight? 
© 2014 - 2024 LaBruyere
Comments10
Join the community to add your comment. Already a deviant? Log In
jaimedeandruart's avatar
Loved it, absolutely amazing! (Maybe because I'm The Son of the Spring, hahah - or maybe because I love poems structured traditionally, with all the cool job of metre and rhythm and etc.) But I love the Winter as well, though it's not exactly cold in my country...

As Parsat said before, the third stanza is especially well written. My favourite part of the poem, with all certainty.

Now... would you allow me to translate this masterpiece of yours to Portuguese? I promise I will NOT destroy its structure and will use my best effort to keep it as close as possible to the original version. Please? :3

I will also credit you, of course ^^