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NaPo III. Dolor Sit Amet

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I wished to offer all I had for pain.
To serve you is to suffer--I agree.
This walking in a fog of fruitless gain
Is ignorant and blissful--just like me.
I'm driven in the force of cleansing rain
And longing now to suffer and be free;
In sorrow which brings good out of your touch
I learn I never minded suffering much.
NaPo day three: an ottava rima.
2 Cor. 4:17.

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KiriHearts's avatar
I quite like this one (I'm behind on everyone's postings) - except maybe the repetition of "suffer". On the fence about that one, haha.